我也想写同人文!但是我写得一篇烂文
老师评价:文笔就像小学生,全程流水仗,看多久都看不出我想表达什么
(TωT)(TωT)(TωT)(TωT)(TωT)(TωT)(TωT)(TωT)(TωT)(TωT)(TωT)(TωT)(TωT)(TωT)(TωT)(TωT)(TωT)(TωT)(TωT)(TωT)(TωT)
语气是:你→自↘己↘看→看↗,写→的→是↘什→么↗?!
老师评价:文笔就像小学生,全程流水仗,看多久都看不出我想表达什么
(TωT)(TωT)(TωT)(TωT)(TωT)(TωT)(TωT)(TωT)(TωT)(TωT)(TωT)(TωT)(TωT)(TωT)(TωT)(TωT)(TωT)(TωT)(TωT)(TωT)(TωT)
语气是:你→自↘己↘看→看↗,写→的→是↘什→么↗?!
著作权归作者本人所有

